weekly expenditure on fast food
The bar graph illustrates the weekly expenditure on fast food which was categorized based on income class, while the other one illustrates the experienced trends of consumption three types fast food within 20 years.
From the chart, it can be clearly seen that the most favorable menu of high salary group is hamburgers in which they spent more than 40 pence. Furthermore this number nearly triples the low income class. Meanwhile, the average income level prefers to purchase fish and chips (25 pence) whereas high and low income class spend almost the same amount pence for that food (approximately 19 pence). It seems the biggest pizza consumers come for high level salary (spend 20 pence per week) while average incomes only spend 12 pence and low incomes only spend 8 pence.
Nevertheless, there is a fast growth of hamburgers and pizza consumption between 1970 and 1940 (from under 100 gram to above 500 gram and from under 50 gram to nearly 300 gram). Whereas there is different situation in fish and chips which are decreased from 1970 to 1985, however it increased again after 1985 to 1990.
Overall, it can be concluded that generally the amount of consumed food is affected by income and there was a change of food demand between 1970 and 1990.
The bar graph illustrates the weekly expenditure on fast food which was categorized based on income class
The bar graph illustrates the weekly expenditure on fast food which was categorized on income class
while the other one illustrates the experienced trends of consumption three types fast food within 20 years.
while another one illustrates the experienced trends of consumption for three types fast food within 20 years.
Furthermore this number nearly triples the low income class.
Furthermore this number nearly triples in the low income class.
Whereas there is different situation
Whereas there is a different situation
Sentence: From the chart, it can be clearly seen that the most favorable menu of high salary group is hamburgers in which they spent more than 40 pence.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and hamburgers
It seems the biggest pizza consumers come for high level salary spend 20 pence per week
It seems the biggest pizza consumers come for high level salary which spends 20 pence per week
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