Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- offer to find somewhere to stay
- give advice about what to do
- give information about what clothes to bring
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Rosario,
I am very delighted that you are coming to Italy next month. It will give me a chance to take you around, as you did so kindly for me when I was in England last year.
Regarding your accommodation arrangement, if you want you can stay with me for these 2 weeks. As you know I am living alone in my apartment and it would be pleased to share it with you whether you would not to spend for an accomodation. Otherwise, if you prefer I can easly book you a cheap but comfortable hotel near the beach so that you can be more independent.
However, let me suggest you a couple of place...
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Sentence: As you know I am living alone in my apartment and it would be pleased to share it with you whether you would not to spend for an accomodation.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
Sentence: Otherwise, if you prefer I can easly book you a cheap but comfortable hotel near the beach so that you can be more independent.
Error: easly Suggestion: easily
Sentence: It was designed by Galeazzo Visconti in 14th century during Renaissance period and turist all over the world came to visit it.
Error: turist Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: As you will arrive in summer period, I reccomend you to bring only light clothes such as shorts and T-shirt as the weather is usually warm and sunny.
Error: reccomend Suggestion: recommend
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No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 268 200 //Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 268 200
No. of Characters: 1119 1000
No. of Different Words: 164 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.046 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.175 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.278 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.518 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.711 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.321 0.07
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