You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

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You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to explain why I am late to return the books. Unfortunately, I am unable to return these books to the library in time even though I took the three books named physics, chemistry, and mathematics from the library last week.

Last week, I had a call from my younger sister’s neighbor, who lives in Central London that she had a serious accident. I had no choice except to go there because I am her only one relative in this country. However, although I thought I am able to come back within three days, I had to stay there, because she was so ill; thus, I had to reside in the hospital one week with my sister.

According to the library rules, every book should be returned within three days, otherwise a fine will be considered. After thinking my circumstances, I hope you will be waived all penalty that may have accumulated for this situation. I will be grateful if you grant this application.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
John

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who lives in Central London that she had a serious accident
who lives in Central London where she had a serious accident

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More sentences varieties wanted. Look, a lot of sentences start with subject 'I'.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 182 200
No. of Characters: 792 1000
No. of Different Words: 111 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.673 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.352 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.504 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.067 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.273 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.783 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.266 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4