You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter:
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir or Madam,
Just want to inform you that I am interested in your today advertising regarding tennis course because it’s my favorite game, I have tennis contest soon in my college. However, I have two problems, and I am looking forward for your cooperate to solve them.
The first problem is the tennis course schedule, reference to you advertisement you will start first of December and will end at 20 December, unfortunately, I have exams in this period and I can join you.
The second problem is the course location, it’s so far from my home and this will cost me around 150 Dollar extra for transportation.
Finally, In case you solved the above problem, kindly be informed that I will not be able to attend for three weeks. I can only attend for 10 days, which is around half course. Therefore, can I refund 40% to 50% from course cost?
Yours faithfully.
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