you should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter
• give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
• explain your accommodation needs
• ask for information about getting to and from the college
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I will be attending the advanced fashion designing concepts training being held at Bradford College from 15th May 2014 till 20th May 2014.
I will be arriving on 14th Afternoon and will be leaving on 21st morning, so I will be requiring accommodation from 14th till 21st May. I will require a single room for this period of time and as I am travelling from India which is a warmer place compared to UK, so I would like to have room heating facility in my room. Also it would preferable to have kitchen facility in the room as I am a vegetarian...
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Sentence: Looking forward to meet you and expect a reply from you confirming the availability of accomodation that suits my need.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 196 200
No. of Characters: 856 1000
No. of Different Words: 110 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.742 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.367 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.61 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.886 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.427 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.837 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.283 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4