Dear Mr. Sam Gill,
I'm Will Smith, and I travelled in one of your buses from Delhi to Mumbai on July 5, 2014.
As it was a long journey of 36 hours so I kept my suitcase with the luggage manager, Mr. Shyaam, who kept it on the roof of the bus. Initially, I was not comfortable that they were keeping my suitcases on the rooftop. When I explained my concern to Mr. Shyaam, he promised that it was a standard procedure, and suitcase is safe from damage and theft.
However, upon arrival on 7 July at Mumbai I found that it was badly damaged. It was a multicolor suitcase with the first letter of...
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Sentence: For this, I have attached the payment reciept of the suitcase.
Error: reciept Suggestion: receipt
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 223 200
No. of Characters: 938 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.864 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.206 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.452 2.4
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.043 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.773 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
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