You want to learn a foreign language for work purpose from a teacher in your locality. Write a letter to him. – explain the reason for learning – how will it help with your work – ask a few details about the course – how did you hear about him ?
Respected Sir,
I am writing in regard to get information about course of the French language. Allow me to elaborate more.
First of all, at present, I am working as Receptionist in Lee Fort Hotel, Canada. The numbers of customer from the ‘Quebec’, which is the provenience of Canada, and France, are gradually increasing day by day in the Hotel. Thus, I have needed to get training of this language to do my work in more effective way. Additionally, according to my job, if I have great command of this language then I can communicate with almost all foreigner which will be increased my employer business.
However, I would greatly appreciate if you could describe some essential things about this course such as, how long it is and the fee structure about this tuition. Finally, I want to inform you that I saw the advertisement of your institution in the newspaper few days ago.
I am looking forward for a prompt reply from your side.
Yours Sincerely,
ABC
about course of the French language.
about the course of French language.
The numbers of customer
The numbers of customers
in more effective way
in a more effective way
I can communicate with almost all foreigner which will be increased my employer business.
I can communicate with almost all foreigners which will increase my employer's business.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 168 200
No. of Characters: 764 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.548 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.738 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.539 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.757 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 4