1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Today, the packaging is the most major procedure of the products. The company invests more money on packaging to make the products attractive, and helpful in avoiding the damage. In this essay, we will discuss the packaging of the product which increases the garbage and pollution.
Firstly, the consumer should avoid the packed product it creates wastage and a pollution. For example, customer visits mc Donald for a small takeaway of Pepsi and burger, joint packed three times of packaging, which consumer accept the same. After consumption of his meal, they throw the packaging on road or anyplace they think about. It exemplifies, that it increases the wastage and there is no need to be over packed.
Secondly, sometimes electronic goods and heavy goods are over packed products, it is the necessity of both consumer and producer. However, it provides safety to the products. They can’t compromise the safety of the product. It exemplifies, that over packaging is necessary for some products to keep it safe.
In the conclusion, No company wants to invest extra on packaging but the competition, make them do so. In some cases, consumer and producer should avoid over-packaging. They have some responsibility for Mother Nature. Therefore, they have to come with a solution of recycling of the packaging which helps to reduce the pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
...e packed product it creates wastage and a pollution. For example, customer visits mc Donald...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20547945205 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83650968659 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4577663783 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303412937431 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10121826951 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702394474665 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183807205844 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315644134706 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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