2. The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart illustrates the information jeans sales and the pie chart compares the part market sale of the two companies in two enterprises at the end of next year in Turkey. Overall, it is clear that the sales of jeans in Jack & Jones Co. will be higher than Mango Co., however, the percentage of market share in Mango Co. will be bigger than Jack & Jones Co.
In particular, on the one hand, sales of jeans by Mango will rise from 150,000 pairs in January to about 500,000 pairs in August, it overcomes the number of jeans will be sold by Jack & Jones at this time. Sales will be increased to over 600,000 pairs in December. The number of jeans will be sold by Jack & Jones often witness higher than Mango on almost months in next year. Sales of jeans by Jack & Jones will growth from approximately 400,000 pairs in January to 900,000 pairs in December. The pie chart notice that, the percentage of Mango will highest, at 50 percent. This is followed by the percentage of Jack & Jones, at 30 percent. The third is other companies, at 20 percent in the next year.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, third, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48453608247 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34970210878 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448453608247 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.82954915 43.030603864 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274467862522 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150210001237 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174735792274 0.0843802449381 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25493547766 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099166149808 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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