The bar chart below provide information about percentage of students who are proficient in a foreign language in different countries.

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The bar chart below provide information about percentage of students who are proficient in a foreign language in different countries.

The give bar chart illustrates the proportion of proficient students in a foreign language in various nations.

Overall, women of all nations except Thailand are more proficient in a foreign language than men. However, males and females of India are on the top of the chart.

With the proportion of around 68% of women of India hold the first position among the countries in the skill of the foreign language followed by the females of Romania. Moreover, India's males are also good in foreign language with 55%. However, figures of China are considerably lower of men and women (30% and 9% respectively).

With regards to Vietnam, nearly 60% women can speak good foreign language, whereas around 29% man accounts for proficiency the language. Further, about 44% females of Russia have good grasp on foreign language and around 27% males. Interestingly, Thailand only the nation where men are ahead of women in foreign language proficiency where male noticed about 30%, while females are lower with 28%.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15757575758 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61187512024 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551515151515 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2596943189 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231371984979 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111045692289 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849085506232 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178644907476 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872547710238 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.