The bar chart shows the different modes of transportation used to travel to work to and from work in one European city , in1950,1970 and 1990.
The given bar chart depict about the four modes of transportation used by people to travel to work in one city in the peroid of forty years.
It is quite evident from the chart that ,in 1950,the maximum percentage of travellers were used walk to their work that was 40%.while the least use of transportation was car which was 8 time less by foot transportation. However,the proportion of percentage of travellers in the usage of bus and bike were 20% and 30% respectively.
Moving further,in1970,the modes of transportation used by travellers were continuesly declining from 30% to 20% . Moreover,in the next two decades,the usage of car was at the peak point of 40%.Whereas the proportion of bus,bikeand foot tansportation were nearly same that was 15%,10% and 12% accordingly.
All in all it is concluded that the usage of car transportation was followed an upward trend . whereas ,the bus transport has variable proportion in the given years.
The given bar chart depict about the four modes of transportation
The given bar chart depicts about four modes of transportation
Sentence: The given bar chart depict about the four modes of transportation used by people to travel to work in one city in the peroid of forty years.
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Sentence: Moving further,in1970,the modes of transportation used by travellers were continuesly declining from 30 to 20 .
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Sentence: Moreover,in the next two decades,the usage of car was at the peak point of 40.Whereas the proportion of bus,bikeand foot tansportation were nearly same that was 15,10 and 12 accordingly.
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