The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

The provided bar graph illustrates the proportion of divorces in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015.

Overall, it is clear from the chart that highest divorce rates were observed by Sweden in all year except 2015. However, Sweden showed the downward trend, while divorces in Finland increased in the given years.

In 2011, Sweden had around 43% divorce rate, it increased significantly and reached at 49% in 2012. Moreover, divorce rates fell down in the following years. About 46% divorces accounts for 2013, while it declined by 2% in the next year and there was a rapid drop in 2015, just above 35% divorce rate noticed in this year.

Turning to the further information, Finland showed the opposite trend as compare to Sweden. In the initial year there was 38% divorces, which fell down at around 32% in 2012. However, 2013 saw a dramatic growth in divorce rates by just near 40%. Following years also experienced a rise in the divorce rates. 2014 and 2015 shared the approximately same figure with just above 40%.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41279582092 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5286574784 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312992402585 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121575478278 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084265603226 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220644586328 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665100208408 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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