The data source provides information on the population of four different countries (India, China, the USA and, Japan) in 1950 and 2003 and an estimation of their respective level of the population around 2050.
Overall, it is evident that in terms of population, throughout the three different periods shown, China is the dominant force, followed by India, the USA, and Japan respectively.
As can be seen from the graph, China is at its peak in 1950. In 2002 its population started dropping and in 2050 the ratio of the total world population in China will have plummeted to 15%. Similarly, Japan's trend is at its highest during the first time period and, soon after that, it decreased marginally in 2002 and, will have bottomed at nearly 2% in 2050.
In contrast, India followed an entirely different trajectory. India's population was initially at 15%, and in 2002 it increased to almost 18%. By the end of 2050, it is estimated to have rocketed at around 18%.
Finally, the ratio of people living in the USA has decreased slightly in 2002 to 5%, where it is expected to remain plateaued for the remaining 48 years until 2050.
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...ed at nearly 2% in 2050. In contrast, India followed an entirely different tra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, similarly, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84102564103 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63474982501 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5282801245 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17780588769 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722835036161 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743703415763 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910499970349 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702012446871 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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