The changes in the Layout of the Woodwards University in not less than

Essay topics:

The changes in the Layout of the Woodwards University in not less than

The two maps illustrate the difference of changes in the Layout of the Woodwards University between 1985 and now. Overall, there are many ways to built againt city in the streets and buildings.
It is clear that the left of map, library in 1985 was expanded to library and IT centre with modern model. In the South- East area, university changed resize the admin building that was smaller and moved up near by lecture theatre in order to have more space for footpaths. The largest car park of Woodwards university, in 1985, was made way for shuttle bus terminal which connecting library and IT center, lecture theatre and passing the admin building. Physical block, biology block and chemistry block in north-east was constructed in close proximity to library, however in now three area was combined into science laboratories behind the theatre and enlarged roads between library and once.
In conclusion, the woodward university in Layout modified whole campus with bigger space so that the school has a spacious area.

Votes
Average: 7.4 (7 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The two maps illustrate the difference o...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...int city in the streets and buildings. It is clear that the left of map, librar...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centres'?
Suggestion: centres
... in 1985 was expanded to library and IT centre with modern model. In the South- East a...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... building that was smaller and moved up near by lecture theatre in order to have more s...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...erminal which connecting library and IT center, lecture theatre and passing the admin ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
... block in north-east was constructed in close proximity to library, however in now three area w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arged roads between library and once. In conclusion, the woodward university i...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the school has a spacious area.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05917159763 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52549757877 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2702898422 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18016498999 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979313830248 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118868104227 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169084020271 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785933377936 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.