The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.

Essay topics:

The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.

The provided pie chart and the graph delineate the percentage of Coca-Cola sales in five different regions of the world in the year 2000 and the share price of the Coca-Cola Company between 1996 and 2001

A glance at the pie chart reveals that the total number of 17.1 billion unit case of coca cola sold in the world. The highest sales could be observed in North America with around 30 percent. The Lowest sale was recorded in Africa and Middle east with 7 percent. The sales proportion in Latin America, Europe and Asia were approximately 25, 20 and 16 percent.

Regarding the graph, generally the share price of Coca-Cola Company increased nearly twofold throughout the given period. To be more specific, the figure of share started at roughly $35 in the first year 1996 and grew considerably to nearly 70 dollars. Then there was a significant dropped in the mid of 1997 and 1998. After It had reached a peak of almost $80 in 1998, the prices dipped considerable from 1998 to 2001 and finishing the period at $55. Although there have been couple of mild fluctuation in this trend.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Africa and Middle east with 7 percent. The sales proportion in Latin America, Euro...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re approximately 25, 20 and 16 percent. Regarding the graph, generally the share...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to 2001 and finishing the period at 5. Although there have been couple of mild fluctuat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68586387435 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48592430137 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3295639831 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276820488429 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859599090258 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106107878137 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201773360787 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100331565662 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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