The chart below give information about the amount and type of water in the world, and also tell the use of water in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given Pie charts depicts the quantity and sorts of water in world and the column graph illustrates the proportion of water used for three different countries namely - Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that availability of fresh water is very low from total world water. While, majority of fresh water found as frozen water. In total, Canada is used the most proportion of water among given countries.
From the first pie chart, saline water covered the most of part of total water with 97.50% and remaining (2.5%) is fresh water. The second pie chart shows that a little over two third (69.80%) fresh water available in frozen format such as glaciers and permanent snows. Whereas, fresh underground water shared just more than a quarter (29.90%). Underground ice is found only around 1% merely.
From column chart, the rate of water used in agriculture is the highest in Saudi Arabia, which accounts for a half. Hence other two sectors, Domestic and Industry have only around 7% and nearly 18% of water respectively. Followed by Egypt, 40 per cent of water goes for agriculture purpose, comparing with domestic use and industrial use which make up approximately 9%.
However, industrial purpose, almost 45%, dominates agriculture in Canada, which constitutes 30 percentage. The fraction of water used in domestic is almost half , around 20 percentage, compare with industrial sector.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...% fresh water available in frozen format such as glaciers and permanent snows. Wh...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... such as glaciers and permanent snows. Whereas, fresh underground water shared just mo...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...audi Arabia, which accounts for a half. Hence other two sectors, Domestic and Industr...
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Line 8, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of water used in domestic is almost half , around 20 percentage, compare with indu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14224137931 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57258213274 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0963337019 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7692307692 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228844705656 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949617090065 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563444201002 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143120191774 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526053083505 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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