The chart below give information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002

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The chart below give information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002

The bar chart compares the popular of different sports in New Zealand in 2002.
Overall, it is evident that the most common sports played by girls and boys is netball and soccer, respectively and swimming was the popular sport that both boys and girls played.
There was a large propotion of girls playing netball, at 25%, followed by swimming which accounted for 23%. The least popular sports among girls were cricket and martial art which had only 1% and 3% of girls played, respectively. Athletic, basket ball, tennis and soccer had the similar number of girls playing, form 5% to 8%. About 10% of girls played other sports.
Among boys, the most common sport was soccer which accounted for 24% of boys playing. Beside soccer, swimming and cricket were the sports played by a large number of boys, at 13% and 10% respectively. The percentage of boys playing basket ball, tennis, athelic and martial art ranked from 4 to 9%. Netball was the least popular sport among boys, only 1%of them playing it. A large number of boy (17%) played other sports.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...g and cricket were the sports played by a large number of boys, at 13% and 10% respectively. The ...
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Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... among boys, only 1%of them playing it. A large number of boy 17% played other sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.260960637 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4278977644 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231360160719 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102745842024 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847815299392 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181616673073 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885247240616 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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