The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph demonstrates that the different proportion between gender interested to played different sports in New Zealand in 2002.

Overall, it can be seen that the boys were interested among most of the sports than girls except the Athletics, Netball and swimming.

Firstly, Soccer Sports were the most common for the New Zealand male group in 2002, accounted for almost 25% while the female was observed lowest proportion at 5% only, followed by other sports was at approximately 17% of total. The cricket and Marital arts sports in male proportion was almost similar which were observed in ...

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Average: 7.8 (16 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'observed the lowest'.
Suggestion: observed the lowest
...ted for almost 25% while the female was observed lowest proportion at 5% only, followed by othe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'at least']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268656716418 0.268076937826 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.119402985075 0.116061578633 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0995024875622 0.0759168565197 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0646766169154 0.0366838410393 176% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00497512437811 0.0131127313244 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.194029850746 0.155750635184 125% => OK
Participles: 0.044776119403 0.0379272487307 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54268525648 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00497512437811 0.0210936926555 24% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0796019900498 0.0948980150116 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00497512437811 0.00437022459523 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00497512437811 0.00967000014798 51% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1078.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.9 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95580110497 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364640883978 0.337110787985 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24861878453 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171270718232 0.171178102325 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121546961326 0.112407865282 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54268525648 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.546246751206 94% => OK
Word variations: 43.1304245422 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 30.1666666667 23.0094962315 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2016505389 42.9750493124 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.666666667 135.714022679 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 23.0094962315 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.689975730869 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 55.0285451197 47.7609492067 115% => OK
Elegance: 2.68421052632 2.94281807926 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375397419713 0.418131533498 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.248220861559 0.181151798455 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0660110780733 0.0850326197045 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.874475963225 0.706616315825 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115320252165 0.157042692854 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252673940792 0.228904883108 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453899584497 0.108899403657 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335521577218 0.367819155151 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.149444492121 0.0812612215331 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286409355012 0.316326947829 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229501023588 0.0921553760075 25% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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