The chart below show the percentage of students joining North West University

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The chart below show the percentage of students joining North West University

The given pie chart gives information about the number of students entering North West University. Overall, there are 7 faculties where arts have the most students. From the figure, it can be seen that non US arts students come from 5 continents with South America as the highest number of people.

Arts students stand in the highest place with 23%. The second and third faculty (computing and science) has just a difference of one percent between the three programs. Business students place fourth with a little more than 5% difference. Dropping one percent from business stands engineering with a bit less than 10%. The second last and the last faculty are law and medicine with a number of 6 and 5 percent in order.

North West University not only accepts US students, but also students from other continents. This is shown from the arts students that consists 5 other continents. Taking more than half of the chart are South American with more than 50 individuals. European students are the next continent with the most students while the remaining 3 continents (Asia, Australia and Africa) consists only less than 10 individuals each.

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Average: 8 (5 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97905759162 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55130197057 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2476665795 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165849609385 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069239087757 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816842573995 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122556920867 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614198944847 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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