The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart illustrates the number of free time allocated in a week grouped by genders and employment categories from 1998 to 1999.
Overall, hours of relaxation time which consumed by retired and unemployed citizens are higher than the rest groups and men spent more time for leisure activities than women.
According to the unemployed and retired categories, they shared the same statistic with over 80 hours of leisure time by males and about 78 hours by females. It is the highest number of spare time spent on compared to the rest categories. Housewives had roughly 50 hours a week on leisure activities which is more than employed women but less than the unemployed and retired women.
Regarding the group of full-time employees, once again the figure reflected the fact that men spent more leisure time than women in the period of 1998 and 1999, respectively 42 hours and approximately 38 hours per week. Noticeably in the employed part-time status, women allocated nearly 40 hours for spare time, however there were no statistic demonstrated for males.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'regarding']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.296296296296 0.268076937826 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.100529100529 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10582010582 0.0759168565197 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042328042328 0.0366838410393 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.010582010582 0.0131127313244 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153439153439 0.155750635184 99% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0379272487307 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66917280652 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015873015873 0.0210936926555 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0846560846561 0.0948980150116 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010582010582 0.00967000014798 109% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1068.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.9 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06818181818 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323863636364 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261363636364 0.247514529752 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.171178102325 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147727272727 0.112407865282 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66917280652 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 49.8309221402 49.3433353143 101% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1428571429 23.0094962315 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9777539902 42.9750493124 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.571428571 135.714022679 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 23.0094962315 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.2792207792 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 3.1724137931 2.94281807926 108% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402996745036 0.418131533498 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.180809981178 0.181151798455 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551612464465 0.0850326197045 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.754866063949 0.706616315825 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176272339379 0.157042692854 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234055123104 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062073919625 0.108899403657 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354479061908 0.367819155151 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132320408921 0.0812612215331 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292796319337 0.316326947829 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309362612688 0.0921553760075 34% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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