The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graph illustrates the variation of leisure time by men and women of different employment status from 1998-1999. The group composed of full time employed, part time employed, unemployed, retired and housewives. The number of hours they spend on leisure time spent by this group will be discussed as you go on.
In this graph, the unemployed and retired men and women are able to spend 70-80 hours for leisure time. This group are the ones who has all the time in the world at their hands, free to do anything they like. They can spend it on watching TV which the usual housewives does, showing that they're second to the group with 40-50 hours leisure time. Some research shows that when people have lots of time to spend, thy usually use it on watching TV, They travel across Asia or cruise around the world, and for some they spend it at the mall. Likewise, choosing a hobby or something to do can be time consuming and tricky on their part.
The chart above shows a lower trend of hours for leisure time under the female group of part time employed females and the least time for full time employed females at less than 40 hrs. The group of males who are employed full time gives less thean 50% of their time for leisure. The hours spent in front of the television to watch basketball games, soccer games and other sports or news channels can accumulate as much time.
In analyzing the chart, you may see that the highest group that spends more time on leisure are the unemployed and retired and the least are the females employed full time. This analysis concludes that the lesser time you spend on work, the higher or the more time you have to use leisure time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...s from 1998-1999. The group composed of full time employed, part time employed, unemploye...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e group composed of full time employed, part time employed, unemployed, retired and house...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed, unemployed, retired and housewives. The number of hours they spend on leisure t...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...the usual housewives does, showing that theyre second to the group with 40-50 hours le...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... leisure time under the female group of part time employed females and the least time for...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...employed females and the least time for full time employed females at less than 40 hrs. T...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rs. The group of males who are employed full time gives less thean 50% of their time for ...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ss thean 50% of their time for leisure. The hours spent in front of the television ...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... and the least are the females employed full time. This analysis concludes that the lesse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53289473684 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13522065459 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476973684211 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1323563716 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220604290613 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100872813506 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676775342185 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159419643617 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284749826162 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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