The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The given bar graph illustrates the expenditure of four European countries citizens on the six different things.

A glance at the bar chart reveals the highest amount could be observed in Britain in all provided item. In contrast, the lowest spending was recorded in Germany in most of the items. To be more specific, on photographic film, Britain spent more than 170 thousand pound, exhibiting the higher number than any other country and item. Next came toys at nearly 170 thousand pound in Britain. There was hardly any difference between the figure of tennis racquets and personal stereos, both were at around just over 150 thousands.

As far as France and Italy concerned, the amount spent in Italy on six items remained between 150 thousand and 160 thousand. In case of Perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos, the amount spent in Italy was slightly higher than France.
As to Germany, only in the case of perfumes and tennis racquets, it spent more than France. Further the spending in all items in Germany remain under 150 thousand pounds.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03389830508 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45574965627 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4145946532 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133872753079 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529663511434 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530607556028 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931707761827 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511411147105 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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