The stipulated bar diagram illustrates yearly rentals and sales of movies in different formats from a specific store in a period of 8 years, from 2002 to 2011. The mentioned parameters are rentals, VHS sales, DVD sales, Blu-ray sales.
It is clear from the data that, rentals were very high during the initial period of 2002 and accounted for almost 185,000, but the following years the figures were declined. From its 2002 figures, it was declined to 140,000 in 2007 before hitting the all time low rental figure of 50000 in 2011. whereas, DVD sales showed a gradual growth right from the beginning. Started off with below 50,000 sales and reached it's peak sale in 2007, registered over 200,000 sales. From 2008 onwards the sale of DVD's showed a continues slight drop till 2011.
On the other hand, VHS sales showed a decreasing trend right from 2002. The sale was 85,000 in 2002, which gradually dropped to just 10,000 over a 4 years time and its been out of the market since then. On the contrary, a new format Blue- ray had been appeared in the market in 2007. It's sales witnessed a whopping upward trend, from 1000 in 2007 to 11,0000 within just over a four years of time.
In conclusion, it is evident from the data that, the sale of films in all format was lost it's popularity over the period of time. Even-though the sale of DVD's witnessed some growth, eventually its sales was also dropped.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whereas
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Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ime low rental figure of 50000 in 2011. whereas, DVD sales showed a gradual growth righ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...format was lost its popularity over the period of time. Even-though the sale of DVDs witnessed...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tually its sales was also dropped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69076305221 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27718988684 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0631456101 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205800647843 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881926528324 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055821756241 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136115257666 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030155806265 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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