The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows data on the difficulties people get when they immigrate overseas regarding ages and problems (related to finances, healthcare issues and finding school for children).
The biggest problem for the middle age group (35-54) and the older group (over 55) is sorting out healthcare, accounting for the highest proportion of nearly 37% and just over 35%, respectively. Recording approximetely 32%, the same problem holds the second place on young group(18-34)'s choices.
Moreover, the middle age group also has the most problems related to money (35%) compared with other groups. However, it is the greatest problem of young group, occupied around 34% and 29% of the former is taken up by the rest group.
Finally, finding a school for children becomes the biggest issue of the middle age group with nearly 19%, meanwhile, the older age group holds the least with only a minor of 2%. Also, just over 5% of the same issue is covered by the young group.
In general, the middle age group has to deal with all problems most. Meanwhile, sorting out finances and healthcare are two difficulties which the largest amount of people, regardless of ages, have to face.
Sentence: Recording approximetely 32, the same problem holds the second place on young group18-34's choices.
Error: approximetely Suggestion: approximately
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 195 200
No. of Characters: 923 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.737 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.733 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.456 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.102 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.75 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
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