the chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.
The bar graph compares difficulties people have when they settle overseas and how they vary according to ages.
Overall, people of all ages find seeking schools for their children the least problematic among three issues, and the age group experiencing it the least is people aged 55 and over, in comparison to those aged 35-54. By contrast, sorting out finances and healthcare are the most troublesome for all, and the middle age group undergo these the most.
Just only about 3 per cent of those over 55 find it hard to look for education institution for their children, and the percentage of the youngest group having the same problem is approximately above 5 per cent. However, the situation is quite different for the middle age group whose numbers of people experiencing the issue are far exceeded the other two groups, with nearly 20 per cent.
Similarly, the percentage of 35-to 54- year-olds having trouble dealing with healthcare and finances are about 38 and 35 per cent, respectively. In the oldest age group, most of people find it hard to resolve the healthcare issues, with just above 35 per cent, higher than those in the youngest group, with around 32 per cent. At the same time, about 28 per cent of the over 55s encounter the financial worries, lower than approximately 34 per cent of the youngest group do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... respectively. In the oldest age group, most of people find it hard to resolve the healthcare ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58157164487 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530701754386 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.3022662162 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112424992402 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616396811142 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566343602625 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929673191842 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644088255971 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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