The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

The bar graph elucidates the number of visitors at three distinguish airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. While John F. Kennedy experienced a periodic fluctuation in the number of airport visitors, the other two airports received stable upward visitors.
Initially, LaGuardia had about 35 million airport passengers whereas other two airports (John F. Kennedy and Newark) recorded around 28 million and around 15 million passengers, respectively. The passengers used John F. Kennedy recorded the highest passengers of close to 50 million in 1997 and 2000 despite the periodic fluctuations.
Meanwhile, LaGuardia experienced a rapid popularity over passengers where it continuously rose to reach at its peak of nearly 70 million passengers, whereas Newark slowly grew to over 40 million passengers by 1998 and which number of passengers remained unchanged until 2000.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['whereas', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291666666667 0.268076937826 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.0902777777778 0.116061578633 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694444444444 0.0759168565197 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0486111111111 0.0366838410393 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0138888888889 0.0131127313244 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138888888889 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0 0.0379272487307 0% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.98191063662 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.0210936926555 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0625 0.0948980150116 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138888888889 0.00967000014798 144% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 877.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.9 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5447761194 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73763899035 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.44776119403 0.337110787985 133% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.365671641791 0.247514529752 148% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253731343284 0.171178102325 148% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.179104477612 0.112407865282 159% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98191063662 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.546246751206 111% => OK
Word variations: 50.0635059248 49.3433353143 101% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 26.8 23.0094962315 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4713841838 42.9750493124 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.4 135.714022679 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 23.0094962315 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 63.3671641791 47.7609492067 133% => OK
Elegance: 2.81818181818 2.94281807926 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304863741384 0.418131533498 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.250870504141 0.181151798455 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0501734614748 0.0850326197045 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.810753884658 0.706616315825 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.096115757902 0.157042692854 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21163516392 0.228904883108 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148934399922 0.108899403657 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274458036573 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0450421791066 0.0812612215331 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222042633753 0.316326947829 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143879189857 0.0921553760075 156% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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