The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip.The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Development of airplane has eased people to go anywhere easily.They have aimed for many objects such as business, holiday, visit family and many more.The chart below shows the amount of major purpose of their travel in 2002.
Not surprisingly that March is the best time to do a business trip.Having 73% percentage followed by September 53%, December 34% and the lowest peak in June with 29%. On the Contrary, 54% respondent pick their holiday in June, while only 18% want to enjoy their vacation in March. Others, relatively high with 31% in September and 35% in December.
Christmas event maybe one of the reasons for people to visit family.26% is the biggest percentage compared with another month, such as June with 13%, September and March with 11% and 6%. Meanwhile, Other purposes only consist little amount of number to trip.
In my Conclusion, March and September is the best months for Business people, Holiday has its own time in June and December is favorited time to visit their family. However, there are several reasons for the people's trip. For example, studying abroad or practice working.
Having 73% percentage followed by September 53%, December 34% and the lowest peak in June with 29%
Description: what is the subject,verb for this sentence?
March and September is the best months
March and September are the best months
December is favorited time to visit their family
December is a/the favorited time to visit their family
flaws:
Well, don't develop task I like task II:
Development of airplane has eased people to go anywhere easily.They have aimed for many objects such as business, holiday, visit family and many more.
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