The chart shows the average annual pay for doctors and other workers in 7 different countries in 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The chart shows the average annual pay for doctors and other workers in 7 different countries in 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented column graph compares employees from 7 distinct nations in terms of their total salary in 2004.

Overall, it is evident that doctors in all countries had a higher income than other occupations. In addition, the highest values of both counterparts were witnessed in the USA.

Turning into detail, physicians and employees in other sectors in China and Canada shared the same income, with nearly 90 and about 60 thousand dollars, correspondingly. Likewise, in comparison with the aforementioned countries, Austrian workers in remaining jobs had an equal salary, whereas the figure for doctors was slightly lower, which was approximately 80 thousand dollars. Furthermore, a discernible difference between two occupation groups was also observed in Germany, in which a 110 – thousand – dollar wage for doctors was considerably bigger than that of remaining counterpart.

Regarding to other countries, Japanese physicians and other workers were paid similarly, with above 40 and nearly 35 thousand dollars, respectively. These figures were faintly higher than those of correspondent employees in Czech Republic, whose income was the lowest among 7 surveyed nations. By contrast, with over 120 thousand dollars, the number for American doctors was 4 times higher than that of their Czech fellows. Meanwhile, this also resulted in a gap of 10 thousand dollars between their salary and that of labors from other sectors.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, regarding, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55656108597 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95128093742 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6820805491 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11782647788 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048365897217 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354448430134 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069547738662 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239547155693 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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