The supplied bar chart illustrates the number of visitors to the different type of amusement places such as theme park, sports, and cinemas in 2009 while the provided table demonstrates the cost of entry tickets of these events.
Overall, Cinema was the most favorite entertainment point and the price for single and family ticket was least among all.
As is presented, approximately 1000 thousand people were present in cinemas and it was the highest figure among given venues. while theme parks were at the second number and attendees were over 300 thousand. whereas the least number of people attended sports events just under 200 thousand.
As can be seen from the table that there were different type foot games event with different prices of family and one ticket. The football game-AFL ticket prices for single varies between 71-75$ and for family 298-280 $ were higher than others. In contrast, theme parks took only one dollar less than to football-NRU for one ticket while they reduced family ticket prices up to 70$. In addition, Basketball and cricket admission fees were 34$ &24 for single and for family ticket 135& 80$ respectively.
The cinema's prices were almost one-fifth to the football and were the least prices among all type of events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... the highest figure among given venues. while theme parks were at the second number a...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...r and attendees were over 300 thousand. whereas the least number of people attended spo...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r and attendees were over 300 thousand. whereas the least number of people attended spo...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat there were different type foot games event with different prices of family an...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$75'.
Suggestion: $75
...ket prices for single varies between 71 75$ and for family 298 280 $ were higher th...
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$280'.
Suggestion: $280
...aries between 71 75$ and for family 298 280 $ were higher than others. In contrast, t...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$70'.
Suggestion: $70
...they reduced family ticket prices up to 70$. In addition, Basketball and cricket ad...
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Line 4, column 440, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$34'.
Suggestion: $34
...ketball and cricket admission fees were 34$ 24 for single and for family ticket 13...
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Line 4, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ball and cricket admission fees were 34$ 24 for single and for family ticket 135 ...
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Line 4, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 24 for single and for family ticket 135 80$ respectively. The cinema's pri...
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Line 4, column 486, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
...4 for single and for family ticket 135 80$ respectively. The cinema's prices...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93896713615 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37671838621 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.41991671 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0588430243508 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275754153561 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0135212588894 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385393518771 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00802316336804 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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