The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The line graph compares the number of UK visitors and the number of UK people who visited other countries from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows countries that were favored most by UK travellers in 1999.

In general, the amount of UK's overseas visitors and UK people travelling abroad both increased during the period. In addition, France and Spain had far more UK visitors compared with other countries in 1999.

In 1979, only 10 million foreign people visited the UK. However, this figure began to rise gradually as it almost reached 20 million in 1989 and nearly 30 million in 1999. Meanwhile, there were about 13 million UK residents visiting other countries in 1979. This number increased to 20 million in 1985 and from then it rose sharply to over 50 million in 1999.

In 1999, France was the most popular destination for UK travellers, with about 11 million of them visited this country. Spain, which had nearly 10 million visitors from the UK, was the second popular country for UK people. Three other countries: the USA, Greece and Turkey, only had about 4 million, 3 million and 2 million UK visitors, respectively.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, then, while, in addition, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85051546392 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44984225407 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9651422624 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36884704634 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17460605314 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102750403405 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246160025354 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739292036594 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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