The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The supplied bar graph illustrates the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000 while another bar graph demonstrates the percentage of never married, married, divorced and widowed American adult in given two years.
Overall, over the period of 30 years, the number of marriages declined tediously and divorces remained almost constant except slight growth after 10years. Whereas unmarried and divorced adults percentage increased and in opposite widowed and married adults percentage decreased with time.
As can be observed, counts of marriages were exactly 2.5millons in 1970 and 1980 . These numbers fell marginally just below 2.5 million in 1990 and after a period of decade figures further reduced and became 2 million. In contrast, divorces were constant except the year 1980 where number grew approximately up to 1.4 million.
On the other hand, in 1970, 70 percent adult were married and it was gone downward below 60 percent in 2000. Furthermore, the divorced adults were almost negligible in 1970 and rose significantly in 2000 and became 10 percent. Similarly, unmarried adults climbed from 15 to 20 percent and in the contrary widowed decreased mildly accounted around 5 percent.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...sed and in opposite widowed and married adults percentage decreased with time. As can...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...were exactly 2.5millons in 1970 and 1980 . These numbers fell marginally just belo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'similarly', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203791469194 0.268076937826 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.156398104265 0.116061578633 135% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0568720379147 0.0759168565197 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0663507109005 0.0366838410393 181% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00473933649289 0.0131127313244 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151658767773 0.155750635184 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0663507109005 0.0379272487307 175% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69521706212 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0142180094787 0.0210936926555 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0616113744076 0.0948980150116 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00473933649289 0.00437022459523 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00473933649289 0.00967000014798 49% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1213.0 1161.00487805 104% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.9 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28497409326 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.450777202073 0.337110787985 134% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.331606217617 0.247514529752 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243523316062 0.171178102325 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124352331606 0.112407865282 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69521706212 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 55.1941747098 49.3433353143 112% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4444444444 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8360165407 42.9750493124 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.777777778 135.714022679 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 54.6050662061 47.7609492067 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.85416666667 2.94281807926 63% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430572234129 0.418131533498 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139573885366 0.181151798455 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0921415284428 0.0850326197045 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.676863377368 0.706616315825 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13313743064 0.157042692854 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203157506274 0.228904883108 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961521764678 0.108899403657 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304182581603 0.367819155151 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0516584402601 0.0812612215331 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298997275271 0.316326947829 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734088842753 0.0921553760075 80% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.