The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

The line chart combined with the bar chart provides in formation about the amount of rainfall in terms of millimetres and the number of degree in the monthly basis on average in a East African area. It is also worth noting that while there is a highest quantity of rainfall in spring, the summer season witnesses the lowest amount of rain. Suprisingly, the similar trend is seen in the average monthly temperature.
To specify, the biggest a mount of rainfall is in April whereas that smallest figure for rain is in July with that in April being 270 millimetres and that in July being only 10 millimetres. In May, October and November, there is a considerable quantity of rainfall on average, followed by that of rainfall in December, March and September. In contrast, it is inclined to be a shortage of rain in other months at approxiamately 20 millimetres.
With regard of temperature, after reaching a peak at over 23.5 in March, the figure for degree decreases markedly to the bottom then rises sharply by 2.5, before declining steeply at almost 21.5 in the end of the year.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e line chart combined with the bar chart provides in formation about the amount o...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...gree in the monthly basis on average in a East African area. It is also worth not...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...s also worth noting that while there is a highest quantity of rainfall in spring,...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...highest quantity of rainfall in spring, the summer season witnesses the lowest amount of rain. Su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7725524894 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.791099891 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14150123791 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714113904936 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479516397669 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085426675576 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668437487859 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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