The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram given clearly depicts the various stages in recycling of plastic bottles and then its usage in new forms. The plastic bottles are collected in the recycling centre and are then segregated from other types of materials like glass and metal. Then the bottles are categorised according to specific colours. Later on, almost 7,000 plastic bottles are tied into each separate bundles and then these bales are pressed. These bales are then carried to reclaimer, where they are broken with the help of bale breaker. After breaking, the plastics are formed into small pieces like flakes. Flakes are then washed, rinsed and finally dried. These flakes are then melted and passed through extruder. Thus the pellets are formed.

The pellets thus produced are then sold out to the producers, which they use to make various products like fibres for carpets and clothing, non food containers and other products.

To summarise the whole process is divided into two major parts one in the recycling center and the other in reclaimer. In recycling center plastic bottles are sorted and bales are made, while in reclaimer the plastic bottles are crushed and flakes are used to make pellets.

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Average: 7.2 (28 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 701, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...hen melted and passed through extruder. Thus the pellets are formed. The pellets...
^^^^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...n sold out to the producers, which they use to make various products like fibres fo...
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241860465116 0.268076937826 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.232558139535 0.116061578633 200% => Less verbs wanted.
Adjectives: 0.0604651162791 0.0759168565197 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0651162790698 0.0366838410393 178% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0139534883721 0.0131127313244 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106976744186 0.155750635184 69% => OK
Participles: 0.120930232558 0.0379272487307 319% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.22090025872 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0279069767442 0.0210936926555 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0046511627907 0.00175180941692 266% => OK
Determiners: 0.0837209302326 0.0948980150116 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093023255814 0.00967000014798 96% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1189.0 1161.00487805 102% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.9 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06632653061 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387755102041 0.337110787985 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290816326531 0.247514529752 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0969387755102 0.112407865282 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22090025872 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 49.3357499405 49.3433353143 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3333333333 23.0094962315 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5707438796 42.9750493124 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 135.714022679 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 23.0094962315 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 45.4149659864 47.7609492067 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.50746268657 2.94281807926 51% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362998740022 0.418131533498 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164724165341 0.181151798455 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0820468899548 0.0850326197045 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.584243465647 0.706616315825 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175570897031 0.157042692854 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179765446852 0.228904883108 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100362977842 0.108899403657 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296370589702 0.367819155151 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339920042612 0.0812612215331 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281737742991 0.316326947829 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438298469354 0.0921553760075 48% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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