The diagram below shows how the instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The procedure elucidates the manufacturing of frequent noodles.
Overall, the process consists of eight consecutive stages, which commence from delivering flour and terminate by labeling, as well as sealing.
To begin with, flour is one of the most quintessential products for producing instant noodles. The flour should be delivered to the storage silos in the first stage, then the mixer will add water and oil in a marked quantity to the flour and mix them in the second step. This mixture will pass through the rollers, which make dough sheets, and then the special technical machine makes the dough strips, which can establish the new noodles discs. Subsequently, these circular discs should be cooked and dried in the oil, after that, cooked and dried noodle discs are placed into the cups in the monotony amount for each one, following this, fresh vegetables, as well as spices, will add to them according to the flavor in order to make them delicious.
At the end of the process, all the cups will be covered with labels and should be sealed by giving them the company or factory's name, before transporting them to the commercial markets in order to sell them to the customers at affordable costs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96568627451 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56182211052 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9757449209 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.714285714 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569617635987 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297912074099 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281890821927 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0310785279221 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031174589928 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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