The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
The given pictorial details about the process by which carbonated drink is manufactured.
Overall, it can be said that, the process takes place in five stages which begin with cleaning of water and end on the boxing of bottles and cans which is sent to supermarket for retails.
It is manifest from the picture that, in the begining, the raw water is filtered before water softener the chemicals are added.The clean water is pumped.Then, the pumped water is heated in an electric heater.The warm water is cooled with the help of cooling pipe.This cooled water is reacted with carbon dioxide.
In the next step, the carbonated water is poured into the mixing tank for colouring, syrup and flavouring and this water is filtered.After that, the filtered water is filled into bottles and cans for packing.Finally, the dispatched bottles and cans are sent to supermarkets for its sale.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'heater'?
Suggestion: heater
...e pumped water is heated in an electric heaters. The warm water is cooled with the help...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the mixing tank for colouring, syrup and flavouring and this water is filtered. A...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Finally, the dispatched bottles and cans are sent to supermarkets for its sale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36125980489 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8049124003 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0889227258634 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462633169462 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916043710387 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979663205446 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123219264192 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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