The diagram demonstrates detailed steps to enroll in university study for graduates from high school.
Overall, the first step is completing application form. The second step is to wait reply from administive of applied university, further procedures are needed depending on results from university administrative.
First of all, the fundamental requirement of apply for university is obtain a high school diploma. If this procondition is fulfilled, students can send a completed application form to the administrative of university. Application form can be downloaded from website. A successful enrollment notice will take 2 weeks. Thereafter, students can select subjects, register with dean and enter university.
However, other circumstances may happen other than an accetan from university. One possible situation is that more documentation is required when students receive a provisional acceptance in two weeks. In this case, students need to compile documents and send them to the administrative again. Another situation is that students may be rejected. In this case, students can choose other couse or cancel application.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
... requirement of apply for university is obtain a high school diploma. If this procondi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83233532934 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32331553089 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 31.4736670246 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144382326446 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536120852623 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109000489807 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128029768109 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119984441649 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.65 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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