The diagrams depict the location of the Eiffel Tower in Paris and the blueprint for project that expanses downward it.
Overall, the Eiffel Tower is situated between the Seine River and the building named Parc du Champ de Mars. Furthermore, beside two platform above, people intend to enlarge five floors beneath the tower which aims to service numerous purposes.
Regarding the diagram given, the Eiffel Tower has 324 meters of height as well as is constructed form 10,100 tones of metal materials. Besides, it has two viewing platforms, and the first of which stands 57m meters away form the ground. People need to experience 1,665 steps of stair in order to set foot on the remainder, with total 115 meters of height.
As for the outline project to extend, there consist of 5 major floors as well as two lifts that are planed to build beneath the Eiffel Tower. The first floor is comprised of ticket office and access to tower, which also has a ceiling made of glass located centre of this floor. Following that, the second and third floors are ultilized for entertainment purposes, including shops, restaurants, cinema and museum. The two final ones are erected for parking.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'platform' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'platforms'.
Suggestion: platforms
... Champ de Mars. Furthermore, beside two platform above, people intend to enlarge five fl...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... As for the outline project to extend, there consist of 5 major floors as well ...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...neath the Eiffel Tower. The first floor is comprised of ticket office and access to tower, whi...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l Tower. The first floor is comprised of ticket office and access to tower, which...
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Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lowing that, the second and third floors are ultilized for entertainment purposes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, third, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37183473286 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8512118228 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185352511709 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740859475936 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895857338143 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126733834633 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074914532857 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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