The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
The maps show the developments that occurred at Queen Mary hospital during a 40-year period from 1960 to 2000.
It is clear that the biggest change that happened was the construction of a cancer centre.Additionally, a shopping centre and farmland had completely vanished by 2000.
In 1960, the hospital was located in the south of the main road. There was a shopping centre to the northwest corner, but this centre was demolished in 1980 to make way for a cancer centre and a pharmacy. Farmland was also destroyed and replaced by a nursing school, while a car park in the southeast still existed.
Between 1980 and 2010, the cancer centre was extended, an the nursing school was moved a little to the east, forcing the car park to become smaller. Meanwhile, the pharmacy and the hospital still remained close to the main road.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
...was the construction of a cancer centre.Additionally, a shopping centre and farmland had com...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d 2010, the cancer centre was extended, an the nursing school was moved a little t...
^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
...d 2010, the cancer centre was extended, an the nursing school was moved a little to th...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79098960307 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4247182195 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123965207243 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687091823753 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845327154078 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960464967889 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917139414478 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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