The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The process graphs depict the life cycle of the silkworm and show the silk cloth production from silkworm.
Overall, there are four stages of the life cycle of the silkworm from eggs to cocoon and the silk production is done in 5 steps.
According to the first diagram, adult silkworm lay eggs in mulberry leaf and the eggs take 10 days to produce larva. The larva eat the leaf and take another 4 to 6 weeks to wrap them with silk thread. After, 3 to 8 days in the fourth stage of their life cycle they are converted into cocoon. After, fourth stage they become moth in 16 days.
The second graph depicts the steps required to produce silk from the cocoons. In the initial stage, the cocoons are selected. Then they are boiled in water and unwinded to produce around 300 to 900 meters thread. The produced threads are than twisted and dyed. The weaving is the last steps which require the dye as well. After, that the silk are produced and could be used.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'eats'.
Suggestion: eats
...ake 10 days to produce larva. The larva eat the leaf and take another 4 to 6 weeks ...
^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... 6 weeks to wrap them with silk thread. After, 3 to 8 days in the fourth stage of the...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e cycle they are converted into cocoon. After, fourth stage they become moth in 16 da...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47727272727 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03456698339 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0534450466 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361316104894 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122066602826 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154341555123 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281862947337 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176198736055 0.0819641961636 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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