Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Nowadays, packaging is the key element in the marketing process and it helps to keep safe the product inside it. But, things are changing people start using over packed products available in the market. Thus, the company started to produce extra packaging to attract people. Therefore, in this essay, we discuss advantages and disadvantages of over packaging product.
Firstly, packaging are use to attract people because there are many substitute products. But producer should avoid over packaging of product. For example, when we go Mc Donald to take away they packed the burger in three layer of packaging which is extra. People eat and through the packaging to dustbin or road anywhere which increases garbage. Therefore, it exemplifies that a people should avoid over packed product.
Secondly, the company use over packaging for many of the product which are necessary to avoid any harm to the product. For example, heavy product and electric are use to be over packed because it will keep them safe. Therefore, it exemplifies thany many times over packaging helps to avoid any harm and keep safe to the products.
In the conclusion, over packaging are useful sometimes to avoid any risk to the product and it sometimes are garbage or increases the population. So the company should have to make some plan and idea to reuse the packaging or recycled it. Therefore, it exemplifies that packaging are used to only necessary product which help to avoid wastage and increase in garbage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08130081301 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60205789098 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459349593496 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.082075778 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316059026418 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147223459277 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109513614155 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225482321663 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237606405187 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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