enviornment are affected by global climate?

Essay topics:

enviornment are affected by global climate?

Nowadays, global climate is became a debatable issue all around the world. global climate is made from pollution, rainfall, deforestation and temperature. Day by day global climate are increasing due many factors like greenhouse effect, population, deforestation and global warming. In the further paragraph, discuss the effect and solution.
In my point of view, global climate are affecting environment and it increasing day by day. Firstly, it’s affecting rainfall due to increase in population and industrialization. Carbon dioxide are increasing due to deforestation were as temperature are also increasing by which glacier are melting. In addition to, pollution is also had a large impact on global climate due to increase in air and water pollution. Therefore, it exemplifies that this factors have large impact on global climate.
On the other side, if there is a problem then there is a solution also behind it. global climate can be reduced by growing more and more tress. It is a responsibility of every individual that they grow tress. By this pollution will be decreased and there will be balance in climate. Moreover, people should used recycled product by which pollution is to be reduced.
In conclusion, I believe that people should take care of environment and as well as government because it is our responsibility to make environment clean and place to live and reduce pollution and global warming.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
Nowadays, global climate is became a debatable issue all around the world....
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Global
...a debatable issue all around the world. global climate is made from pollution, rainfal...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30396475771 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12420224054 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533039647577 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3924531899 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299760442988 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102071840968 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999365613 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165097447433 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101935481463 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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