The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
Earth is only placed where life is possible and it is beautifully surrounded by people plants and animals. But, things are getting changed and the environment is harmed by the people. Therefore, they are making environment dangerous place to live. There are many problems by which environment are becoming dangerous to live on. In the further paragraph we will discuss the problem and who is responsible for solving it.
Firstly, the environment is destroyed by us by cutting the trees and making building and roads and the place to live. The Trees helps to release oxygen and observe carbon dioxide its helps to respiration. Therefore, people are destroying trees and it increasing the temperature. For example, people are cutting a tree for houses, the organization is cutting for industries and government is cutting for roads. It exemplifies that all are responsible for this situation and everyone should help to solve this.
The second reason, pollution are the other major factor that is responsible for making environment dangerous. Day by day pollution are increasing and it making difficult to breathe. The government should be banned many industries of this they have to take some majors. Therefore, People are making environment polluted by cars and noise. It exemplifies that everyone is responsible for this and everyone has to majors to keep the environment clean and good place to live.
In conclusion, the environment is destroyed by everyone and all of them are responsible for that. People should make some awareness and government should make some rules for making it a good place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'help'.
Suggestion: help
... roads and the place to live. The Trees helps to release oxygen and observe carbon di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21923076923 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87372045105 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453846153846 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3541312131 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8235294118 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261100211396 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091078454722 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719814584308 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171445188065 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556951646454 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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