The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The supplied chart enumerates the outcome of a survey which sampled 100,000 individuals to know their visits to abroad from 1994 to 1998 and the another chart depicts their destinations of same period. The highlighting feature is most of the visits made by UK residents to Western Europe for the purpose of holiday in 1998.
The minutest visits made by UK residents was to North America in 1994 for some unknown reasons whereas the maximal visits to Western Europe for spending holidays. Western Europe was the favourite place of UK residents in 1995 for holidays. In contrast to holidays, trivial visits was made for business and visits to friends and relatives in all these five years. The feeblest visits was made to North America by UK residents in 1996 for other reasons.
Moreover, the visits to Western Europe mounted year by year for the purpose of holidays. It reached to roughly 19,700 in 1997. Whereas the least visits was to, anew, North America which upsurged to nearly 1560. In the year 1998, the topmost visits was made for the purpose of holidays, over, to Western Europe. The visits was virtually 24,500. The supreme visits was to Western Europe and was for the purpose of holidays.
While analysing overall, the gutter visits made in 1995, which was 896. The mostest visits was in 1998 to Western Europe roughly 25,000. Even the supreme visits was made for the purpose of holidays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for the purpose of holiday in 1998. The minutest visits made by UK residents wa...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...ys, over, to Western Europe. The visits was virtually 24,500. The supreme visits wa...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s was made for the purpose of holidays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, while, as for, as to, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89539748954 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35124107398 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414225941423 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1862117914 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928804031745 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413202734044 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733958166472 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867640050391 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916690842196 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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