The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph illustrates the number of vehicles in England and Wales from 2000 to the present and also give predictions up to 2020. The bar chart depicts the information about carbon dioxide emission in tonnes by four different transport methods, which are cars, buses, vans and trucks over the same period.

Overall, the trend for cars purchasing is continue growing till today and also expect more expansion by 2020. CO2 emission are aspected to escalate in future.

To begin, there were nearly 20 million vehicles in England and Wales in 2000. Then, total number were a steady increase to 35 million in following 10 years and is expected to experienced a rapid upward tendency reaching around 60 million by 2020.

The column graph shows four principle sources of CO2 emission. Carbon dioxide emission by cars was the highest amount among four vehicles. To start with almost 2.25 tonnes in 2000, this amount was rose marginally to just over 2.5 tonnes and will ended with 3 million in 2020. Interestingly, trucks went through and follow a similar trend but amount is significantly less, from around 0.7 tonnes to nearly 1.3 tonnes. Rate for buses and vans is likely to keep steady at around 0.4 tonnes and 0.6 tonnes respectively.

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Average: 8.2 (32 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...erall, the trend for cars purchasing is continue growing till today and also expect more...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
.... CO2 emission are aspected to escalate in future. To begin, there were nearly 20 mill...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'end'
Suggestion: end
...inally to just over 2.5 tonnes and will ended with 3 million in 2020. Interestingly, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9619047619 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46662989493 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1059907962 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198048257388 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756977945787 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703276703984 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123872988686 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845644908613 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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