The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in and average English home.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph describes the needs of consuming for electricity in Britain during two seasons, winter and summer, and the way of using it is measured by the pie chart. The electricity units demand is counted in full-day spending activities, and the reasons for using electricity are costumed by four kinds of ways, heating, cooking, entertainment, and cleaning.
Overall, it is obvious that the British persons spend more electricity units during the cold season rather than hot season. In the winter, the Britain people consumes electricity between 30.000 and 40.000 units, and the number runs steadily during the middle of the day at 40.000 and increases over 40.000 before midnight. Furthermore, at summer, the English persons use electricity always under 20.000 units.
That electric consumption during winter corresponds to the high rate of using electric for heating, the number of heating is slightly more 50% than any other activities, such as for entertainment, cooking, cleaning. The spends are only 15% and 17,5% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., cooking, entertainment, and cleaning. Overall, it is obvious that the British ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'so', 'as for', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292553191489 0.268076937826 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.106382978723 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.063829787234 0.0759168565197 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0425531914894 0.0366838410393 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106382978723 0.0131127313244 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148936170213 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0379272487307 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82352588621 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00531914893617 0.0210936926555 25% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00531914893617 0.00175180941692 304% => OK
Determiners: 0.101063829787 0.0948980150116 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1037.0 1161.00487805 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.9 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4012345679 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.456790123457 0.337110787985 136% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308641975309 0.247514529752 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216049382716 0.171178102325 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123456790123 0.112407865282 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82352588621 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.546246751206 107% => OK
Word variations: 50.9982190399 49.3433353143 103% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1428571429 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6583887732 42.9750493124 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.142857143 135.714022679 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.689975730869 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 54.0070546737 47.7609492067 113% => OK
Elegance: 3.03333333333 2.94281807926 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531370166441 0.418131533498 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138129595153 0.181151798455 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110964461299 0.0850326197045 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.686047620988 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182096384853 0.157042692854 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288049548304 0.228904883108 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135546481934 0.108899403657 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33707612921 0.367819155151 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0962332658419 0.0812612215331 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.392737309965 0.316326947829 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133523113135 0.0921553760075 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.