The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.
The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph provided compares England’s electricity consumption throughout a winter day to that in a summer day; and the pie charts represents the information on the purposes which the electricity is used for.
Overall, it is clearly from the two charts that the amount of electricity consumed during a day fluctuates in both winter and summer although the figure is much higher in the former than the latter; and it is mostly used for heating rooms and water.
As can be seen from the graph that over the first three hours of a day, the demand for electricity in winter rises sharply, peaking at approximately 40,000 units at 3:00. Then followed by a significant decline to a bottom of just over 30,000 at 7:00. In contrast, the first 9 hours in a summer day sees a steady fall in the energy needed, reaching a low of 12,000 units. After that the amount of electricity climbs to the highest point of over 20,000 at 14:00. During a 4-hour period between 21:00 and 24:00, there are gradual increase in the demand for electricity in the winter, as well as in the summer, reaching a peak of nearly 50,000 and around 20,000 units respectively.
According to the pie chart, the majority of electricity is used for heating. There is a precisely the same share on the usage for lighting, TV, radio and the usage for vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools, being 15%. The remainders. 17,5%, is for ovens, kettles and washing machines.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, well, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7609561753 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67679871212 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1253500214 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284639030863 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111831157356 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102660373773 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204133845446 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868867640045 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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