The graph below shows how much money a city council gave to book clubs over a four-year period. summarise the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below compares the proportion of money a city council gave to book clubs and the figure of book club members over a period of four years.
In general, we can clearly see that council expenditure for book clubs was directly proportional to the number of book club members. The amount of money a city council delivered to book groups and the figure of book club members peaked in the end of the third year.
In the first year, a city council spent for book clubs was £20,000 and the number of book club members was 60000 people. In the next period, the amount of money that city council gave to book clubs increased slightly to £225,000 while the number of book club members decreased gradually to 5000 people. In the end of third period, the amount of money city council gave to book clubs and the number of book groups rose dramatically to £40,000 and 10000 persons.
By the fourth period, the number of book group members was expected to reach 14000 persons. By contrary, a council spent on book clubs has been predicted to become less than previous period, with only £35,000.
a city council spent for book clubs was £20,000
the money which was spent for book clubs was £20,000
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