The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the changes in the percentage of elder people who are at the age of 65 and above in three countries namely the USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 to an expected proportion in 2040.
Overall, it can be seen that three countries showing increase in older population even though Japan showed a reduction initially.
In 1940, around 10 per cent of the US population was people who aged 65 or above,which was the highest population than other two countries, while Japan had around 7 % and it holded the second position. From 1940 to 2000, both the countries followed a similar trend of significant increase in old age population and reached at 15% and 14% respectively. Now, Sweden overcomes the USA at around 20% which is 5% higher than the USA and it is expected that by 2014 the USA and Sweden have 25% and 25% of old people who aged 65 or above.
However, Japan followed a different trend when compared with the other two countries. In 1940, there was 5% of elderly population aged 65 or above and it remained same in 2000 even though there was slight reduction in between. After 2000, Japan showed a pattern of increase and reached at around 8% now. By 2040,Japan's old age population rate will overcome the other two countries at more than a quarter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6288209607 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57067952003 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510917030568 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1532830115 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225389233704 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103278074228 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590454792644 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159330061969 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387615739397 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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