The graph below shows results of a survey of college going boys and girls activities other than academic studies.
The graph compares non academic activities of college going boys and girls.
It is clearly visible from the chart that, boys spend one-third of their time surfing the internet and 15% of their playing games on computers. Nearly 40% time invested in outdoor games like basketball (20%), football (17%) and baseball (7%). Lastly, they spend 8% of their time listening to music and devoted only 3% to reading.
On the other hand, girls show a good variety in their non academic activities. Their most popular activity is dancing that accounts for one-fourth of their time. This followed by internet and computer games that cumulatively occupy 30% of their time. Nearly one fifth of their time is dedicated to sports, listening to music and gym.
Overall, it is clear that girls live more active life
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ying games on computers. Nearly 40% time invested in outdoor games like basketbal...
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...ounts for one-fourth of their time. This followed by internet and computer games ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01492537313 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37538614652 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6263257575 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158907463996 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847596493301 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121050611911 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149108485402 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133523829788 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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