The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The given line graph clearly illustrates the variation in quantity of passengers in an underground metro station between 6 am to 10 pm.

The underground station experienced a massive increase in the number of passengers from 100 to 400 between 6 and 7 am, before hitting a free fall to nearly 200 at 10 am. Then there was gradual growth in the passengers till 2 am, followed by a sharp decline to 100 at 4 am. Now after 4 pm to 8 pm, the same kind of pattern can be observed for the graph. The figures shoot up to nearly 400 and then plummeted to approximately 100, then witnessed a slight fluctuation at the end of period.

To sum up, it is quite apparent that London underground station saw a significant fluctuation in the number of passenger over the given interval. The highest numbers of passenger observe at 8 am and 4 pm.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50326797386 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88228624706 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2874015356 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307620266579 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149806496339 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111309719663 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251293311331 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090695495472 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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